Why there is worry?
so sad! its bad time
yes! now its bad
Only for moments
wait ! see the ra...
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Why there is worry?
so sad! its bad time
yes! now its bad
Only for moments
wait ! see the rays
the golden rays
of hope from up
Trust ! I'm with you
standing behind
leave all worries
yes! I'm your friend
an internet friend
stay in touch
feel the presence
share the feelings
feel the presence
feel the pleasure
yes! I'm your friend
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Hi Govindaraj
nice to see u here with inspiring thoughts!!!
I value it
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For GEEKUNNEL. Nice poem. Sentiments expressed are good. Please keep it up. Why am I replying late? website failure! Thanks and regards. Govindaraj S
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thnx a million!!! dear Mojo!!!!
for your inspiring thoughts!!!
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gee, :-)) you are a saviour!! he...he... thanks for inviting me. It's always a pleasure to know that I have friends.
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hello Aditi Ray!! thnx amillion!!!
you are a wonderful friend!!! may God bless you !!!!!
have a great day!!!
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Simple and touching... though I am poetically challenged, the message was clear.
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thnx dear poetbleu
nice to have a friend like you!!!!
regards
geekunnel
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I bet you make a great friend, Geek. Thanks for a really nice read!
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thnx for ur kind visit and suggestion!!!
regards
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Good attaempt, but would have been netter if there is more rhyme scheme in it
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